Description: my purpose of this post is to make a connection
With Messi.
My tic tac toe is: just like me
My big idea is that Messi inspires me to be the best soccer
player ever
My character is Messi
Sucses critea:
Comprehension
text to text
Text to self
Text to world
Feedback/feedforward:I think that maybe next time you could add more detail to how you two are similar to each other and add more information about who Messi is and what book he comes from.
Olivia.
Evaluation: I can add a little more to my post and the character Messi.
You have been given some fantastic feed forward from your crtitical friend Sam. I think you could take some time to improve your post.
ReplyDeleteAlso I wonder if you could comment on how making connections helps you with your goal of comprehension?
Take some time to do some thinking about this and update your post.
Thanks for updating your post Sam. Make sure you take the feed forward from Olivia into your next post.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Sam. How does Messi inspire you to be the best soccer player ever? From Mum
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