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Description: I am learning about complex sentence. my goal is to learn all about complex sentence. I didn't know any think about complex at the start of the year and now I ever think about complex them.



BIG IDEA: the red is the complex sentence.
their's the video that is got idea from.

Once a upon a time where was a german shepherd puppy  called bobby. Bobby was so so fun to play with. But he was in a very quite store, in the USA. It was like he hiding. bobby was very very fast’s puppy. once’s this guy called Thomas came in the store, and he look at this big big bull dog. Thomas turn around and look a bobby in this little cage.

for something really awesome to happen to bobby Thomas look and look at bobby Thomas was happy but bobby was even happy then Thomas. bobby cried and cried until Thomas would leave the shop. there was all type of animals like white tail spiders and crocodiles. for some reason he was looking at a monkey.

the monkey was called Steve. a long tail and a very red bum. Steve was weird. he like licking his hand all the time. but Steve was very cute licking his hand. the colour of Steve’s d was white. bobby was sad because Thomas buyer Steve. the next day. his man called jack came in the store. jack looked at bobby. bobby looked at jack. jack said this dog called bobby is my now. bobby was jumping around and around. bobby was all happy at jacks million dollar house.          

the end

THE Image of a german shepherd